Wednesday, August 11, 2010

Revise

Situational

1) Text
Audience
Purpose
Formal / informal

2) Number your points and ensure you have included all the points

3) Align salutations and signing off to the left.

4) There should be at least 2 paragraphs.

5) Re-read what you have written and check for spelling or grammtical errors.

Continuous

1) SPCOC - Need to include problem and complication! Think of something creative.

2) Use vivid descriptions.

3) Check for spelling / grammatical errors.

10 comments:

  1. Just came to see the model essays... I did't expect to see this helpful information :D

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  2. Suggetion: How about make the words more colourful(literally) so it looks better and people would be more intrested to see it :D

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  3. woops "Suggetion" should have a "s" inbetween the "e" and the "t"

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  4. Thanks for the suggestion. Will consider that the next time I post. :)

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  5. ffdip;oirhfkio;oij;g7589709gjri;oih//krieoqijor/rowih4400789830878498y//jk jfklirji5pijiu8748590029874//yyujhrjhdfjhjdh758729875859rjntjjk6jk234hil//

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  6. Why did I write

    Dear Police?!

    I thought of writing

    Dear Police Officer!!

    No!!!

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  7. i tink dear police officer will fail too

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  8. your "interested" also spelled wrongly.

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